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May 27, 2024
Writing Feedback / Writing task 1: The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money [3]
The chart indicates changes in the number of British people with severe age range doing charity between 1990 and 2010.
Overall, the total percentage of people over 36 years old raising funds in both 1990 and 2010 is more than that of the minors and adults.
As can be seen from the chart, although the 36-50 years old in 1990 was the highest proportion of people raising funds (over 40%), that in 2010 recorded a fall with only 35%. Also following a decrease, the 26 to 35 years old in 1990 accounted for more than 30% which was higher than that of 2010 with nearly 25%. When it came to the prior 25, the money achieved in 1990 was documented 3 times as much as that of 2010.
As regards the money given to charity, the figure for the 51 to 65 years old witnessed an rise by approximately 5% and took the first place in 2010. The 20 year period witnessed an increase in the proportion of people over 65 raising funds from over 30% to 35%.
The chart indicates changes in the number of British people with severe age range doing charity between 1990 and 2010.
Overall, the total percentage of people over 36 years old raising funds in both 1990 and 2010 is more than that of the minors and adults.
As can be seen from the chart, although the 36-50 years old in 1990 was the highest proportion of people raising funds (over 40%), that in 2010 recorded a fall with only 35%. Also following a decrease, the 26 to 35 years old in 1990 accounted for more than 30% which was higher than that of 2010 with nearly 25%. When it came to the prior 25, the money achieved in 1990 was documented 3 times as much as that of 2010.
As regards the money given to charity, the figure for the 51 to 65 years old witnessed an rise by approximately 5% and took the first place in 2010. The 20 year period witnessed an increase in the proportion of people over 65 raising funds from over 30% to 35%.
