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Lucasvn

Aug 23, 2024

Writing Feedback / [WRITING TASK 1] the number of enquiries in one city over a six months [5]

@Do Duy Hai
In the phrase "person and by telephone"
The slash that was used to separate these 2 forms in the image does not mean "and by". The slash means "or". There are only 3 methods listed. However, when you indicated "and by", you changed that information from 3 to 4 options. That created an information deviation which would not be good for your score in an actual setting. You would have received point deductions because of the incorrect information delivery.

Lucasvn

Jul 10, 2024

Writing Feedback / Subjects such as Art, Sport and Music must being rejected from the school.Do you agree or disagree? [2]

Nowadays,with the improve of technology,many people want children to study science and don't encougre them to join in another subject as art,sport,and music.they think that these subjects are useless to study and it will be better when their children study science to follow the present era.From my opinion, i don't agree with this statement, First, with art, this subject help us to increase our careful caculation and help other people to admire how beatiful the things are through a picture with color.
Second, with sport it is an important subject that we musn't rejected, sport help us to make our physical and mental more better. we can not study without exercies, its has an important role in our developing time. Finnaly, with music, music makes us to hear soft melody, or exciting music,all people in the world like to hear music, music is great, there are many bands all over the worlds, the musician create the song for people to hear, they make the world more exciting, music are indispensable in our life. As you can see any subject have it good,our children maybe good at some of these subject, so we should not rejected them from school