Posts by lanadelrey

lanadelrey

Jul 16, 2024

Writing Feedback / Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative [3]

Your essay contains several grammatical mistakes, you also relies too much on providing example instead of explain your points radically. Also, paraphrased prompt is too sketchy, along with that is your unclear perspective of the prompt, as a result, your writing will not receive a high score in terms of task respond. Moreover, your writing is hard to be understood, since your arrangement of ideas is not really clear, aslo because of these unnecessary examples you gave.
Consider these aspects and rewrite another version of it.
Hope this helps!

lanadelrey

Jul 15, 2024

Writing Feedback / How an island has change before and after the construction of tourist amenities [2]

The provided maps illustrate how an island has change before and after the construction of a plethora of tourist amenities.

Overall, infrastructures were mainly constructed in the center of the island, expanding to two sides of it. After having been renovated, the island becomes a place where recreational activities are the main purpose with several facilities available for it.

As can be observed, there are a number of features were retained during the development, namely these palm trees on two sides of the island, as well as a beach on the left of it.

Regarding newly built features, in the center of the island where lies a reception building, which are surrounded by a vehicle track, leading to the other main building after it, which is a restaurant. In front of the reception is a pier which leads to where sailing boats dock, it is also connected by the track. On the two sides of the reception area are accommodation, these bungalows are built adjacent to each other in circles, and connected by footpaths. Moreover, the beach is now utilized for swimming, linked by a long footpath from the left housing areas.

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