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Name: Vera faith
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Vera24   
Sep 6, 2024
Scholarship / The world of law - Personal statement for the GKS scholarship [8]

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Law - Personal statement for the GKS scholarship



I am writing to express my profound interest in pursuing an undergraduate degree in International Law at a prestigious university in South Korea through the Global Korea Scholarship (GKS). My passion for justice, human rights, and the transformative power of the legal system has been shaped by personal experiences, as well as my dedication to understanding how laws can shape societies for the better. Studying in Korea, a country known for its robust legal system and commitment to democratic values, offers me the perfect platform to deepen my knowledge and contribute to the global legal community.From a young age, I have been drawn to understanding how societies function and how justice is served. Growing up, I often found myself in situations where I mediated disputes among my peers, and these small experiences made me realize how much I enjoyed bringing people together to resolve conflicts. It was not just about solving a problem, but about ensuring fairness and equality in every situation. This early spark eventually evolved into a deep passion for law, as I saw how legal systems can protect rights and address societal challenges.During my academic journey, my fascination with societal structures grew stronger through my love for subjects like history and political science. My high grades in these areas reflect not just my academic strength, but my genuine interest in understanding the complexities of human behavior and governance. However, it wasn't just in the classroom that I found my passion for law. Joining debate clubs, participating in conferences, and even overcoming my initial fear of public speaking became turning points for me. In one debate, where I was named Best Speaker, I felt a sense of accomplishment not just from the award but from realizing that I could use my voice to advocate for ideas and principles I believed in. It was in these moments that I knew law was not just a profession I wanted to pursue-it was a calling.For me, law is more than a career; it is a way to make a tangible difference in the world. My interest in international law and human rights stems from a belief that every person, no matter where they are born or what their circumstances, deserves protection under the law. I have been particularly drawn to issues of inequality, discrimination, and social justice, and I believe that with the right legal framework, we can address many of the injustices that persist globally. South Korea's legal environment, with its combination of civil law traditions and modern democratic values, offers the ideal context to explore these areas. The country's innovative spirit and leadership in technology also intrigue me, especially in how law intersects with emerging technologies-a field that is increasingly important in our globalized world.Upon completing my undergraduate studies, my short-term goal is to gain practical experience by working in a law firm in South Korea. I believe that working in Korea will provide me with invaluable insights into the legal system, expose me to diverse legal challenges, and allow me to refine my skills in a dynamic, international environment. In the long term, I plan to return to my home country and establish my own law firm. My aim is to use the knowledge and experience I have gained in Korea to contribute to legal reform and justice in my own community, advocating for the protection of human rights and providing access to legal services for marginalized groups. I am committed to bridging cultural and legal perspectives, and I believe that studying law in Korea will equip me with the tools to make a meaningful impact in both my country and the international legal community.Studying in Korea is more than just an academic pursuit for me. I am excited to immerse myself in Korean culture, learn the language, and build meaningful relationships with peers from all over the world. Having already begun studying Korean, I see language as a bridge that will allow me to engage more fully with the community around me and appreciate the country's rich history and traditions. This cultural immersion will not only broaden my perspective but also enhance my ability to work in diverse international environments in the future.In conclusion, the Global Korea Scholarship offers me a chance to combine my passion for law with a world-class education in a country that values both tradition and innovation. I am committed to fully embracing this opportunity, contributing to the academic and cultural life of Korea, and using the skills and knowledge I gain to advocate for justice and human rights on a global scale. Thank you for considering my application. I am hopeful for the opportunity to contribute to and learn from your esteemed institution.
Vera24   
Aug 13, 2024
Scholarship / The world of law - Personal statement for the GKS scholarship [8]

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Personal statement for the GKS scholarship



I initially wanted to consider becoming a doctor, partly because of my fear of public interaction and social anxiety. I believed that being a doctor might allow me to avoid large crowds and intense scrutiny. However, my mother made me realize that every profession requires interaction with people, whether patients, clients, or colleagues. This realization led me to confront my fears rather than allow them to dictate my career choice.It was during this time of self-reflection that I began to notice my natural inclination for resolving conflicts and seeking justice. In school, I often found myself in situations where I mediated disputes among my classmates. One particular incident stands out: a misunderstanding over some lost money led to accusations and tensions. Instead of letting the situation escalate, I proposed that we search for the missing money and resolve the issue among ourselves, rather than involving the principal, which could have led to severe consequences for an innocent party. My approach helped us find the money and peacefully resolve the dispute, earning me the nickname of "lawyer" among my peers.This experience, along with others, sparked a realization within me-I was drawn to the idea of justice and fairness, and despite my fear of public speaking, I wanted to pursue a career in law. I have always been dedicated to achieving excellence. I was consistently among the top 5 in my class, a reflection of my commitment to my studies and my determination to excel. My strong academic foundation has prepared me well for the rigorous study of law. My fear of public speaking, however, continued to hold me back for some time. I avoided opportunities to participate in debates or any activity that required standing in front of others. However, one day, my teachers and peers encouraged me to join a school debate. I was hesitant and filled with anxiety, but I decided to take the chance. As I stood in front of the audience, I was overwhelmed with nerves, but as I began to speak, something shifted. I found myself drawing on my own understanding of the topic, speaking with a clarity and confidence that surprised even me.This experience was a turning point. I realized that I could overcome my fears and that my passion for justice was stronger than my anxiety. After that debate, I actively sought out more opportunities to speak in public. I joined the press club at my school, where I regularly gave updates and shared news during assemblies. This involvement helped me build my confidence and develop crucial skills such as critical thinking, effective communication, and the ability to remain composed under pressure.In addition to the press club, I later joined the newly formed debate club, participating in competitions with other schools. Although we never won any awards, the experience of debating and engaging in intellectual discussions was invaluable. It allowed me to further hone my public speaking skills and solidify my commitment to pursuing a career in law.These experiences, coupled with my academic achievements, have prepared me well for the challenges of studying law at the university level. While I have not received formal awards, the journey of overcoming my social anxiety and developing the confidence to speak in public is one of my proudest achievements. It has equipped me with the resilience and determination necessary to succeed in the demanding field of law.Conclusion The GKS scholarship represents more than just an opportunity to study law in Korea-it is a chance to further develop the skills and qualities I have worked so hard to cultivate. I am eager to immerse myself in a new legal system, contribute to meaningful discussions, and continue growing both personally and professionally. I believe that with the support of this program, I can achieve my goal of becoming a lawyer who not only understands the law but also possesses the courage to stand up for what is right, regardless of the challenges I may face.
Vera24   
Aug 13, 2024
Scholarship / Improving my language skills and culture - language study plan [3]

@omoju precious
Your narrative effectively showcases your deep passion for Korean culture and language. To enhance it, consider emphasizing specific examples of your learning journey and how achieving TOPIK levels will directly support your future legal studies and career in Korea. This will strengthen the connection between your language skills and your broader academic and professional goals.
Vera24   
Aug 8, 2024
Scholarship / Part 2 of study plan After Arriving in Korea [4]

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Goal and future Plan Gks scholarship



Goal of Study

My goal is to gain a comprehensive understanding of the Korean legal system and comparative law. This knowledge will help me contribute to legal reforms and advocate for justice in my home country.

Detailed Study Plan

I will begin with an intensive Korean language program to prepare for my academic courses. I will take foundational courses in Korean law and international law. Participating in activities like moot court and legal clinics will help me gain practical experience.I will focus on specialized legal courses and, if possible, internships at legal firms or NGOs in Korea to gain hands-on experience. I will also start my research on comparative law.I will continue with advanced legal courses and aim to publish my research findings. Attending international legal conferences and seminars, if available, will help me stay updated and network with professionals.I will complete my thesis on the impact of Korean legal practices. Preparing for the bar exam in my home country will be a priority, along with networking with legal professionals to secure post-graduation opportunities.

One essay per thread please.
Vera24   
Aug 8, 2024
Scholarship / GKS-U personal statement (PNU - tourism and convention) [4]

@starssssy
Your statement is strong in terms of personal motivation and connection to Korea. However, to make it more impactful, focus on tying your experiences directly to the tourism industry and clearly explaining how the scholarship will help you achieve your goals. Also, emphasize what unique contributions you can bring to the field, particularly in the Korean context.
Vera24   
Aug 8, 2024
Scholarship / Gks-U medical major personal statement [4]

@Beacon of hope
Focus on making the essay more concise by emphasizing the key moments that shaped your passion for medicine, and clearly connecting these experiences to your future goals. This will strengthen your narrative and make your application more impactful.
Vera24   
Aug 4, 2024
Scholarship / Part 2 of study plan After Arriving in Korea [4]

After Arriving in Korea
Korean Language: When I arrive in Korea, I'll dive into the intensive Korean language program offered by the GKS scholarship. This program promises rigorous language training, and I'm eager to make the most of it to become fluent. I'll also join language exchange programs with Korean students, which will help me practice conversational Korean and feel more at home both academically and socially.I plan to use Korean as much as possible in my daily life, whether I'm shopping, dining out, or commuting. This everyday practice will help me fully immerse myself in the language. On top of that, I'll take additional Korean classes focused on legal terminology, which will be vital for my studies and my future career in law.

English Language: In Korea, I'll keep my English skills sharp by joining English-speaking study groups at the university. I'll continue reading legal texts in English and compare them with Korean legal texts to grasp the nuances of both languages. Writing research papers in English and getting feedback from my professors will further hone my legal writing skills.I'll also participate in international moot court competitions conducted in English. These will give me practical experience and boost my advocacy skills. By engaging in these activities, I'll ensure my English proficiency remains strong and relevant to my future career in law.
Vera24   
Aug 4, 2024
Scholarship / GKS-G KOREAN LANGUAGE MAJOR, PERSONAL STATEMENT [4]

@vivibimil
I'd recommend focusing more on your transformative experiences in Korea, detailing how they shaped your academic and personal growth. Highlighting specific challenges you overcame and skills you developed during this period will add depth to your narrative.
Vera24   
Aug 4, 2024
Scholarship / 2025 GKS-U Study Plan on how to improve foreign language [3]

@kumaaa
Your essay shows a thorough and proactive approach to learning Korean, emphasizing cultural immersion and practical application. Your dedication and use of specific resources demonstrate a clear plan to achieve your language goals.
Vera24   
Aug 3, 2024
Scholarship / English and Korean Languages - Study plan for the gks [2]

Before my arrival in Korea



I am committed to immersing myself in the Korean language to ensure I can navigate my new environment confidently. I've enrolled in an online Korean language course through TalkToMeInKorean, which provides comprehensive lessons in reading, writing, listening, and speaking. I plan to dedicate two hours every day to practice these skills diligently.Beyond the formal lessons, I will immerse myself in Korean media, such as dramas, news, and podcasts, to enhance my listening comprehension and familiarize myself with the cultural nuances. To further improve my speaking skills, I am excited to join a local Korean language exchange group. This will give me the opportunity to practice conversational Korean with native speakers, allowing me to build confidence and fluency in real-life interactions. By fully engaging with these resources and experiences, I hope to develop a strong foundation in Korean before I begin my studies.

While my English proficiency is already at an advanced level, I recognize the importance of honing my legal English skills for my future career. To achieve this, I will continue taking advanced English courses at a local language institute, with a particular focus on academic and legal English.Every day, I will incorporate reading academic papers and legal texts into my routine to expand my vocabulary and deepen my comprehension. To refine my writing skills, I plan to practice essay writing regularly and seek constructive feedback from my instructors. Additionally, I look forward to joining English debate clubs. Engaging in debates will help me improve my public speaking and critical thinking abilities, both of which are crucial for my journey in the legal field.By immersing myself in these activities, I aim to enhance my proficiency in legal English, ensuring I am well-prepared for the challenges and opportunities that lie ahead.

One essay at a time please.
Vera24   
Aug 3, 2024
Scholarship / GKS-U Personal Statement Psychology / university track [5]

@Eduarda
The essay is compelling and highlights strong personal determination and resilience. It effectively connects educational goals with a broader impact on mental health awareness.
Vera24   
Jul 26, 2024
Scholarship / The world of law - Personal statement for the GKS scholarship [8]

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Growing up, I was fascinated by the world of law. I vividly remember watching the news with my father, where court cases and lawyers in action captured my attention. I often asked my mother about these people, and she explained that they were lawyers, individuals who help judge cases and ensure justice is served. Intrigued, I declared that I wanted to become a lawyer when I grew up. My mother encouraged me, saying, "That's good. But remember, you have to read a lot." This encouragement fueled my determination, and I immersed myself in reading and learning.One significant experience during my childhood involved a conversation about lawyers and honesty. I overheard someone saying that lawyers often lie to win cases. This troubled me, as I believed that being a lawyer should not be about lying but about upholding the truth and fighting for justice. I resolved that my path in law would be defined by integrity and a commitment to advocating for what is right. My decision to become a lawyer stems from a deep-seated desire to help people fight for their rights and to be an advocate for justice. With this passion, I am determined to pursue a career in law, specializing in human rights, family law, corporate law, and civil law. My goal is to contribute to a just society where everyone receives fair treatment and legal protection. "The law is not a mystery; it is a living, breathing entity that shapes and defines the world around us."From a young age, whenever I was asked what I wanted to become in the future, my answer was always the same: "I want to become a lawyer." Growing up, I realized that not all childhood dreams come true easily, but my determination to become a lawyer remained unwavering. In my country, many people lack the opportunity to receive a proper education. I was fortunate to have this opportunity, and discovering the GKS program felt like a pivotal moment-a reliable path to achieving my dream.Despite facing discouragement from those who suggested I pursue a more financially lucrative career, I stood firm in my resolve. My mother has always been my greatest supporter, encouraging me to follow my passion. Witnessing the societal impact of law and the importance of advocacy, I knew that, even if I never became a lawyer, I wanted to be an advocate for justice. There were times when I considered abandoning my dream, thinking it might be better to pursue a trade if I couldn't study law. However, I realized that compromising on my dream would lead to regret. I am committed to pursuing a career in law, where I can make a meaningful impact on my community.I have completed my high school education with a focus on humanities and social sciences, consistently achieving strong grades. Subjects such as history and literature have been particularly influential in shaping my understanding of societal issues and the importance of law. Throughout my academic journey, I have actively participated in various extracurricular activities that have enhanced my interest and understanding of the legal field. These experiences have prepared me well for the challenges and opportunities of studying law at a higher level.One of the most significant experiences that influenced my decision to pursue law was my involvement in a community legal aid project. Volunteering to assist underprivileged families with basic legal education and documentation has shown me the profound impact of legal support on improving lives. This experience reinforced my commitment to becoming a lawyer who can advocate for justice and support those in need. Additionally, my mentor, a respected lawyer in my community, has played a crucial role in guiding and encouraging me to pursue my passion for law. Their insights and support have been invaluable in shaping my academic and career goals.I have been actively involved in various extracurricular activities that have contributed to my personal and academic development, including the Debate Club and community service. While I have not received any formal awards, my dedication and contributions to my community and extracurricular activities have been recognized by my peers and mentors. I have written articles on legal awareness for my school newsletter, which have been well-received and appreciated by my community. Additionally, I have developed skills in legal research, public speaking, and organization through my various activities and projects.Although I am not fluent in Korean, I am committed to learning the language to enhance my studies and interactions in Korea. My proficiency in English is at a functional level, and I am continuously working to improve my language skills to better prepare for the academic challenges ahead.In conclusion, the opportunity to study law under the GKS program is a pivotal step toward achieving my career goals and making a meaningful impact on my community. I am eager to embrace the challenges and opportunities that come with this program, and I am confident that the knowledge and experience I will gain will equip me to become a dedicated and effective advocate for justice. Thank you for considering my application.
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