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Name: Abshir Ali
Joined: Oct 25, 2024
Last Post: Oct 26, 2024
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alian   
Oct 26, 2024
Scholarship / Mastercard Foundation Scholarship at the University of Edinburgh [5]

I remember apply this it was one of the hardest, You should focus on explicitly linking specific program elements to how they will help you achieve your long-term impact goals, and aim to simplify sentences for clarity.
alian   
Oct 25, 2024
Scholarship / "The quarantine" - Leadership and influencing Chevening [4]

@Holt
I have seen your feedback it's always incredibly helpful, and I'm grateful for your guidance. Thank you so much for taking the time to provide such valuable feedback on my essay.
alian   
Oct 25, 2024
Scholarship / "The quarantine" - Leadership and influencing Chevening [4]

Dear all, I'd like your feedback on my leadership and influence essay. Please let me know what parts you think I can cut.

The quarantine changed everything. While the world stood still, my life moved forward in ways I never expected. The loss of my father during this time was not only emotionally devastating but also came with immense responsibilities. I found myself stepping into his shoes, tasked with completing a significant landscaping project for the xxxx o xxxxxxxxxxxx in cityx, countryx.. This experience tested my resilience and leadership, pushing me to adapt quickly, manage a team, and deliver results during an uncertain period.

It was in those moments of pressure and solitude that I discovered a passion for web design and development. Determined to create something positive from this challenging time, I taught myself web development and began taking on freelance projects. This was more than just a means of survival it became a journey of empowerment. Technology allowed me to create value for myself and my community.

My leadership journey continued as I took on a role at xxxxx, xxxxxx first innovation hub. I led initiatives aimed at closing the digital skills gap, especially for young women in my community. By organizing and mentoring participants in coding boot camps, I empowered them to turn ideas into tangible solutions. Many of these participants have since become freelancers or secured roles with international organizations like the UN, this experience reinforced my belief that leadership is about creating opportunities for others to thrive.

Leading the digital campaign for the xxxx xxxx Summit in 2021 further broadened my influence. As the Social Media Coordinator, I worked with a dynamic team to make the summit xxxxx's largest tech event, trending across social media and shining a spotlight on the country's burgeoning tech scene. My role was not just about managing a campaign but about inspiring others to recognize the power of technology in driving societal change.

Through the Chevening scholarship, I aim to deepen my leadership capabilities and amplify my impact. Studying in the UK will provide me with the academic and professional tools to drive digital transformation in xxxxxxx. I plan to use this experience to advance my career and contribute to my country's development by equipping young people with the skills and opportunities they need to succeed. For me, leadership is about action-building a brighter future not just for myself, but for the next generation.
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