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Graduate / Personal Statement for MS in Human Factors Engineering at VTech [2]
Hey, would love to know where i can improve my personal statement for my masters programs. Any advice is appriciated!
Prompt: Applicants are asked to provide a 1 - 2 page personal statement which includes the following:
Why do you want to undertake graduate work?
Why do you qualify to pursue a graduate degree at Virginia Tech?
What do you expect to derive from your program of study?
If you have a concentration or area of interest in mind, briefly outline your interests in this area.
What do you expect to contribute as a student and subsequently as a member of the profession?
If you have not previously indicated in your application the names of faculty members you are interested in working with, please include that information in this statement.
At the age of twelve, a doctor assured me that my x-ray showed nothing concerning. Trusting the assessment left me walking on a hairline fracture for two months, despite worsening symptoms. That trust had consequences. It made me confront healthcare as a system that directly shaped my everyday life, a system whose failures carried real repercussions. At the time, I thought of these failures as individual mistakes. I believed that the most direct track to preventing situations like this for others was becoming a physician, so I became committed to pursuing medicine.
I've always had a deep interest in psychology because it allows me to better understand human emotion and how people interpret information. So, naturally, psychiatry seemed like the perfect path. During high school and college, interning at hospitals helped me learn how medical decisions are made and communicated and how these choices shape patient centered treatments. Working as a research assistant in psychology and neuroscience labs taught me crucial research methods such as behavioral task administration and data analysis. While my clinical and analytical skill set was growing, I had questions I couldn't yet articulate. I started sensing that some challenges weren't rooted in individual judgements. There was something missing.
After graduating in May 2025, I moved back to my home city Hyderabad, India, where I started my gap year internship at ASHA Hospitals, a specialized psychiatric hospital. Getting the opportunity to work closely with experienced physicians and observe patient interactions strengthened my ability to be empathetic without compromising analytical thinking. I watched patients with widely diverse backgrounds and diagnoses attempt to navigate complex treatment decisions and started to notice a theme. Despite their differences, there was a pattern in how patients reacted to the use of neuromodulation techniques as treatment. Technological interventions such as transcranial magnetic stimulation (TMS) or deep brain stimulation (DBS) prompted similar feelings of hesitation. Patients questioned safety and their discomfort demonstrated limited trust, leading them to turn down impactful treatment procedures.
Watching people deny the care they deserved was difficult, but as I thought back to my previous experiences, it was not new. When interning at KIMS Hospital, people turned down robotic surgeries. While onboarding participants at CANLab, some people declined the study after learning about the TMS and fMRI portions. Even residents at ASHA struggled with administering neuromodulation procedures, showing that these challenges extended to trained users. My misinterpreted x-ray became clearer in this context, not isolated but a part of a broader pattern within the system.
I had found the missing piece. This realisation clarified my ideas of where meaningful change within healthcare could come from. Across these environments, outcomes were not only limited by the efficacy of medical technologies, but also how they were designed and integrated into human workflows. Principles of trust, safety perceptions and usability shaped clinician and patient decision making. Clinical judgement alone was not enough to address the failures, these spaces require human-centered design.
I took every opportunity I could find to further my understanding of user centered design. The Google UX Design Certificate was a great resource to understand the design process, combined with my psychology background, it solidified my ability to systematically identify user needs, test my designs through user evaluation and iterate on my solutions based on evidence. I taught myself tools like Figma and Adobe Illustrator to create low- and hi-fi wireframes and prototype interactions. Psychological principles from my undergraduate coursework such as mental models, attention, and cognitive load theory informed how I structured interfaces to reduce user error and support decision making through design. I applied these principles to design an app that allows DJs to learn, create and share mixes. I built a solid foundation of skills that I was eager to apply onto physical products.
I started working at a design firm, Humanising Design, where I collaborate with design engineers and product designers to develop human-centered, innovative products. My role involves translating qualitative and quantitative user insights into design requirements and evaluating how real users interact with physical systems. Applying human factors methods and user centered design principles including ergonomic analysis, anthropometry considerations, risk identification, and usability testing has only reinforced how design choices can influence trust in automation and safety perceptions; the same barriers I observed in clinical technologies like TMS and robotic systems. I am currently leading the design process for an automated cat litter cleaner. This process so far has required me to think critically about the importance of feedback timing, transparency, and reliability. Designing for the Indian market has highlighted the importance of accessibility, it has reinforced how design choices must account for cultural contexts in order to reduce the gaps in who is able to confidently rely on a system.
I want to deepen the human factors perspective I have already begun applying in clinical and product design contexts. The integration of cognitive ergonomics and human performance theories with macroergonomics makes Virginia Tech's M.S. HFEE program ideal for graduate study in this field. This framework aligns perfectly with the questions that have driven my journey in this field; how people develop trust in technology within medical contexts and make safety-critical decisions under uncertainty. Classes like ISE 5604 Human Information Processing and ISE 5624 Human Factors Research Design will strengthen my ability to design systems, while ISE 5634 Training Systems would teach me how to evaluate systems, not only for patients, but clinicians and trained operators as well.
The research being conducted in Dr. Nathan Lau's Lab, the Systems Cognition Engineering Laboratory (SCEL), especially stands out to me. I believe I would thrive in currently ongoing research projects like CAPE-HAT and studying hospital soundscapes. My sustained exposure to clinical settings and my psychology background give me a unique perspective on the role of neurocognitive and emotional states in high-stress environments. Through these experiences, I have been trained in understanding where medical errors can potentially arise and I am fascinated by research aimed at predicting and preventing them using artificial intelligence models and simulations.
As a future professional, I am committed to becoming a human factors engineer who contributes to medical technologies and healthcare spaces that people trust and are empowered to use. The HFEE program at Virginia Tech would be a tremendously critical step towards my goal. I am confident in my abilities to excel as a graduate student and I aim to emerge equipped with the knowledge and skill set I need to translate human-centered principles into safer, more effective healthcare systems.
Hey, would love to know where i can improve my personal statement for my masters programs. Any advice is appriciated!
Prompt: Applicants are asked to provide a 1 - 2 page personal statement which includes the following:
Why do you want to undertake graduate work?
Why do you qualify to pursue a graduate degree at Virginia Tech?
What do you expect to derive from your program of study?
If you have a concentration or area of interest in mind, briefly outline your interests in this area.
What do you expect to contribute as a student and subsequently as a member of the profession?
If you have not previously indicated in your application the names of faculty members you are interested in working with, please include that information in this statement.
At the age of twelve, a doctor assured me that my x-ray showed nothing concerning. Trusting the assessment left me walking on a hairline fracture for two months, despite worsening symptoms. That trust had consequences. It made me confront healthcare as a system that directly shaped my everyday life, a system whose failures carried real repercussions. At the time, I thought of these failures as individual mistakes. I believed that the most direct track to preventing situations like this for others was becoming a physician, so I became committed to pursuing medicine.
I've always had a deep interest in psychology because it allows me to better understand human emotion and how people interpret information. So, naturally, psychiatry seemed like the perfect path. During high school and college, interning at hospitals helped me learn how medical decisions are made and communicated and how these choices shape patient centered treatments. Working as a research assistant in psychology and neuroscience labs taught me crucial research methods such as behavioral task administration and data analysis. While my clinical and analytical skill set was growing, I had questions I couldn't yet articulate. I started sensing that some challenges weren't rooted in individual judgements. There was something missing.
After graduating in May 2025, I moved back to my home city Hyderabad, India, where I started my gap year internship at ASHA Hospitals, a specialized psychiatric hospital. Getting the opportunity to work closely with experienced physicians and observe patient interactions strengthened my ability to be empathetic without compromising analytical thinking. I watched patients with widely diverse backgrounds and diagnoses attempt to navigate complex treatment decisions and started to notice a theme. Despite their differences, there was a pattern in how patients reacted to the use of neuromodulation techniques as treatment. Technological interventions such as transcranial magnetic stimulation (TMS) or deep brain stimulation (DBS) prompted similar feelings of hesitation. Patients questioned safety and their discomfort demonstrated limited trust, leading them to turn down impactful treatment procedures.
Watching people deny the care they deserved was difficult, but as I thought back to my previous experiences, it was not new. When interning at KIMS Hospital, people turned down robotic surgeries. While onboarding participants at CANLab, some people declined the study after learning about the TMS and fMRI portions. Even residents at ASHA struggled with administering neuromodulation procedures, showing that these challenges extended to trained users. My misinterpreted x-ray became clearer in this context, not isolated but a part of a broader pattern within the system.
I had found the missing piece. This realisation clarified my ideas of where meaningful change within healthcare could come from. Across these environments, outcomes were not only limited by the efficacy of medical technologies, but also how they were designed and integrated into human workflows. Principles of trust, safety perceptions and usability shaped clinician and patient decision making. Clinical judgement alone was not enough to address the failures, these spaces require human-centered design.
I took every opportunity I could find to further my understanding of user centered design. The Google UX Design Certificate was a great resource to understand the design process, combined with my psychology background, it solidified my ability to systematically identify user needs, test my designs through user evaluation and iterate on my solutions based on evidence. I taught myself tools like Figma and Adobe Illustrator to create low- and hi-fi wireframes and prototype interactions. Psychological principles from my undergraduate coursework such as mental models, attention, and cognitive load theory informed how I structured interfaces to reduce user error and support decision making through design. I applied these principles to design an app that allows DJs to learn, create and share mixes. I built a solid foundation of skills that I was eager to apply onto physical products.
I started working at a design firm, Humanising Design, where I collaborate with design engineers and product designers to develop human-centered, innovative products. My role involves translating qualitative and quantitative user insights into design requirements and evaluating how real users interact with physical systems. Applying human factors methods and user centered design principles including ergonomic analysis, anthropometry considerations, risk identification, and usability testing has only reinforced how design choices can influence trust in automation and safety perceptions; the same barriers I observed in clinical technologies like TMS and robotic systems. I am currently leading the design process for an automated cat litter cleaner. This process so far has required me to think critically about the importance of feedback timing, transparency, and reliability. Designing for the Indian market has highlighted the importance of accessibility, it has reinforced how design choices must account for cultural contexts in order to reduce the gaps in who is able to confidently rely on a system.
I want to deepen the human factors perspective I have already begun applying in clinical and product design contexts. The integration of cognitive ergonomics and human performance theories with macroergonomics makes Virginia Tech's M.S. HFEE program ideal for graduate study in this field. This framework aligns perfectly with the questions that have driven my journey in this field; how people develop trust in technology within medical contexts and make safety-critical decisions under uncertainty. Classes like ISE 5604 Human Information Processing and ISE 5624 Human Factors Research Design will strengthen my ability to design systems, while ISE 5634 Training Systems would teach me how to evaluate systems, not only for patients, but clinicians and trained operators as well.
The research being conducted in Dr. Nathan Lau's Lab, the Systems Cognition Engineering Laboratory (SCEL), especially stands out to me. I believe I would thrive in currently ongoing research projects like CAPE-HAT and studying hospital soundscapes. My sustained exposure to clinical settings and my psychology background give me a unique perspective on the role of neurocognitive and emotional states in high-stress environments. Through these experiences, I have been trained in understanding where medical errors can potentially arise and I am fascinated by research aimed at predicting and preventing them using artificial intelligence models and simulations.
As a future professional, I am committed to becoming a human factors engineer who contributes to medical technologies and healthcare spaces that people trust and are empowered to use. The HFEE program at Virginia Tech would be a tremendously critical step towards my goal. I am confident in my abilities to excel as a graduate student and I aim to emerge equipped with the knowledge and skill set I need to translate human-centered principles into safer, more effective healthcare systems.
