Undergraduate / "educational opportunities" and more - why you considering OSU? [4]

I am considering The Ohio State University not only for its nationally recognized extracurricular activities but for its educational opportunities provide for their students. I believe OSU will provide me with a great academic and social environment to ensure success in the working world. I am ambitious, enthusiastic, and a self-driven individual who never gives up on anything.

With adequate resources and great research facility, I know OSU will help me pursue a course in Pharmacology. It is my dream to help dispense prescription drugs to patients, provide the necessary information about those drugs and help patients understand the instructions their doctors or other health practitioners have provided. Majoring at OSU will allow me to test my capabilities in my area of interest and ameliorate me to make my dream a reality.

Beyond providing a great educational atmosphere for their students, it is a place where students can be part of its wide diversity groups. This will help me view many social topics in a different vista and relate myself to those social differences. I believe attending Ohio State would make me a better person to serve my community and help me in my future ventures. Being part of the great traditions like OSU vs. Michigan rivalry would be an honor.

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