Undergraduate / Why Colby, an earth-friendly college [6]

fix the opening. it's neither intriguing nor productive. the school knows how much they rock
kthxbye

Graduate / Statement of Purpose for Grad School in Anthropology; 'Martin Luther King, Jr' [6]

never end with "Thank you for your time and attention to my application for master's studies of anthropology at the University of XXXXX. I appreciate your generous and kind consideration of my application, and I look forward to being in touch with you soon."

it's an essay, not an interview for a job

Undergraduate / Why Northwestern (is it personal enough?) [6]

I couldn't help but notice that you have posted two Northwestern essays for this same topic. Are you using this one or the previous one? In my opinion, this essay is much better and more original.

Good Luck with your application process! I'm currently a student at Northwestern and absolutely love it here. It will be wonderful to have you join us!