Undergraduate / FSU Admission Essay (confidence and leadership) [4]

Im don't write well so I really need help before I send this in.

Through my experiences in life, I have grown to understand how a person should conduct himself in front of other people. I feel that the qualities I possess will not only contribute to the university but also the relationships I acquire while attending the university. My determination, confidence, and my leadership ability are just a few of the traits I feel will contribute to the university community.

My determination has proven to be one of my principal qualities. I have assumed that the only way for me to become successful in life is to exceed the expectations of people that have seen what my life situation is. For the most part, this assumption has proven right; everything that I have accomplished has taken another level of determination to get through.

My confidence and leadership qualities have caused me to accomplish more things in school than anything else has. I have used these things to become an authority figure to my friends, pushing them to work hard and present themselves in a mature manner.

To sum it up, I think that my determination, aggression, and leadership qualities will add to the university experience because they will lead me to better relationships with other people.