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halongphutu   
Dec 16, 2009
Writing Feedback / Viet Nam traffic [7]

I think it is traffic accidents. It's my mistake. Thank for answers
halongphutu   
Dec 16, 2009
Writing Feedback / Viet Nam traffic [7]

Viet Nam is a developing country. We have to face with many problems; one of which is traffic. Accident transport and the congestion of traffic are becoming serious day by day

Traffic accidents in Vietnam have been increasing at the alarming growth rate in the recent years. In 2008, there are more than 10.000 dead. The number dead from traffic accidents is much more than the number dead of cancer. The main reason is poor awareness of traffic participants such as driving after drinking wine, not wearing helmets ,weaving back and forth or conducting motorbike races on the road. In order to reduce the number of traffic accidents, we should seriously punish traffic violators, encourage people to obey traffic rules and limit the speed in all road. And we have to do it immediate.

Traffic jam in rush hour is becoming an alarming problem in the big cities such as Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh. It takes poeple many hours to go only some kilometers. There are many reasons for this problem. First reason is the fast increase of vehicles but the land area for traffic does not increase. Poor awareness of people is cause traffic jam, too. Everyone tries to find their own way. Last reason, the project of digging up road causes serious traffic jams. To reduce the problems the government have to develop the network of public transport such as metros, trams. It will decrease the number of vehicles. And we must increase land area devoted to traffic and divide lanes for cars, motorbikes and bicycles.

Traffic is always a very difficult problem and we need a lot of time to solve it. However, i trust that every problem will be able to solve if it have got the support of all people

Help me fixe errors. Thank you
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