hot1590
Dec 28, 2009
Undergraduate / Brown "advice" essay - Pickle Time [4]
Do you really have to mention that your parents set a high expectation on you? Because I just know that is not a good thing to mention in a college essay, and it sounds as if you have been driven by your parents, like this:
"My parents push me too hard --> I feel bad --> I have a pickle time --> I feel better --> My parents push me too hard again..."
Not a good thing...
So I guess you could give more details on what makes you feel bad, like problems with friends..
Correct me if it's just me feeling this way.
Do you really have to mention that your parents set a high expectation on you? Because I just know that is not a good thing to mention in a college essay, and it sounds as if you have been driven by your parents, like this:
"My parents push me too hard --> I feel bad --> I have a pickle time --> I feel better --> My parents push me too hard again..."
Not a good thing...
So I guess you could give more details on what makes you feel bad, like problems with friends..
Correct me if it's just me feeling this way.
