Undergraduate / How am I different from the World?? I am not a genius who receives national merit. Notre Dame [5]

It is true that we should not be afraid to be different from the world to make a difference in the world. Being different from the world often involves courage. Courage or in other words, confidence that what I do is true and just, is a source of demonstrating unique qualities. However, I was afraid to be different from the world.

From when I was little, I was shy. I was afraid of being stood out. This problem had been a dilemma for me. My passion to contribute to the world seemed to contradict my personality. I often fell into self-disparagement, asking questions like, "Why am I so shy?", and "What can I do with my personality?" But, I was overlooking an important fact: There are other ways to be different from the world. I had another trait that could differentiate me from others: compassion. I feel compassionate to people who are hurt and banished.

I came to America as an international student from Korea, and saw much irrationality in Korean communities. Students often oppress other students because they are older. Having seen this "hierarchy" for many years, I felt compassionate to the oppressed. Compassion, in definition, is investing whatever is necessary to heal the hurts of others. I listened to those who needed comfort whenever I was available.

Objectively, I may not be the most promising student: I am not a genius who receives national merit. However, I believe that I have what the University of Notre Dame is looking for. I am willing to commit my life for humanity. I appreciate how the Notre Dame community is aware of oppression that makes people's lives burdened, and I want to contribute to its mission.

Maybe too negative? I tried to be honest, but you know... Any advice is welcome