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Dec 29, 2009
Undergraduate / I'm actually really excited to meet you; Stanford Roommate Essay [11]

your essay definitely catched the readers' attention, but I'm not sure if admission offocicers would like the fact that you specifically mentioned that you wanted THEIR attention. try to focous on telling about YOU rather than simply trying to gain their attention. Good luck!
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