Undergraduate / "Tell us about players and games" - Uchicago supplement [3]

Although cliché, winning was never what it was about, as the times we spent together as a family made the points as to who ended up with the most properties or who went bankrupt first unimportant.

I would probably get rid of this line, as it is cliche. The following sentences you wrote after it demonstrates the maint point of this sentence, so the idea is still there.

The content of the essay is really good; I've always wanted that 'Family Game Night' thing, too ha. I also like the conclusion, it leaves a good lasting statement.