Sunshinydays323
Jan 4, 2010
Undergraduate / My parents' involvement with volunteering; Tufts- let your life speak [11]
You can try removing the parts of your essay where you list things your mom has done and also the countries your dad has visited. Although they are your inspiration you ismply just have to say that they were involved. The essay inst about them so you do not need to list what they have done.
I hope this helps!
You can try removing the parts of your essay where you list things your mom has done and also the countries your dad has visited. Although they are your inspiration you ismply just have to say that they were involved. The essay inst about them so you do not need to list what they have done.
I hope this helps!