Essays / GENTRY MEVZ: How can I make this part of my Screen play clearer? [2]

"Our vision is blurred as we feel the luminous moment pass buy like a dream. We look down at the sidewalk's freckling of blackened gum. At the brown, beige, and fibrous debris of the storm. Two conversely statured shadows walkbeside one another. We look up at the taller stature, a man in his thirties. His tanned skin silhouetted by the autumn sun. He is GENTRY MEVZ, Martin's father."

I'm not sure the first sentence is clear enough. how can i make it more visual?