Undergraduate / My roots in Algeria - Barrett Honors College application essay [4]

This is anapplication essay to get into the Honors College at the university I got accepted to. Please let me know what you honestly think about it. NOTE: This is a VERY rough draft!

Prompt: Barrett is comprised of students from diverse backgrounds with distinctive life experiences and rich cultural traditions. Reflect on how you will contribute a unique perspective to our community of scholars. Be specific.

Three years ago, I was fortunate enough to have the opportunity to travel back to my roots, to Algeria. The trip was eye opening to say the least. I was suddenly very aware that I take a lot of daily acts for granted. Taking a shower was no longer a daily habit due to the fact that water was scarce and was not always guaranteed to flow when you turn on the faucet. People were staying up until one or two o' clock in the morning waiting for the water to come. Water is an essential part of life and these people would sacrifice a lot to get it. Despite their daily hardships, I was thoroughly impressed by their optimistic and positive attitudes. My grandma never once complained about the situation and was always in a good mood. I believe that every student adds a different flavor to a community with their experiences, practices, and backgrounds. At Barrett's Honor College, I hope to come together and share my experiences with others and grasp the opinions and beliefs of others, all the while broadening my learning horizon. I hope to provide a different perspective to other scholars and maximize my learning potential at Barretts.

I'm still trying to figure out the rest. Any suggestions are welcome!