Posts by filomena

filomena

Jan 29, 2010

Undergraduate / need direction for "platform on environmental issues, education, etc" paper [5]

thank you. i do have my platform though. (ex. recycling opportunities, legistlation, etc.)
i was really looking for like, a sample introduction sentence, because i don't know where to start. philosophically? (with a thoreau or wilde quote?) or practically? (as the leader of a new populace...)

filomena

Jan 27, 2010

Undergraduate / need direction for "platform on environmental issues, education, etc" paper [5]

The following is a supplement for Eugene Lang (liberal arts school):
You have been elected the leader of a new populace. The future is in your hands. Outline a platform on environmental issues, education, and race and ethnicity.Be wise and be creative. (maximum 500 words)

I have my platform, but it's far from organized. What I really need is a concise introduction and thesis to guide my essay. Every time I think about where to start...I delve way too deep. (I'm practically having an existential crisis). Would anybody be SO SO kind as to (vaguely/sloppily) outline one for me? Or ideas...anything! ANY input would be such an appreciated act of selflessness