Essays / should we care about celebrities? (introduction)... [2]

Begin with your first sentence introducing the title and then write lines about the debate.

According to the law, celebrities have the same rights as citizens of the state. However, law and reality are two separate domains and in the real world the question of celebrity privacy is a complicated one. Some people feel that celebrities have the same rights to a private life as non-celebrities. Other people feel that they don't have the same rights because they are role-models and should act accordingly. This paper will take a in depth view of both sides.

---i dont know... perhaps something like what i've written? i dont know how you would incorporate phelps into the introduction. perhaps save it for the body of the paper. i think you had all the information needed for the introduction, it just lacked organization.

good luck.

Essays / Is the United States ready for a female president [12]

i think brainstorming is a great idea and something you can start with... it will help you frame your essay and think of things you would want to include.

perhaps you want to look at the feminist movement and how women first got the right to vote and how long women have been voting but still there is no female president. maybe you could look at how many women are in the senate right now... and would they be potential presidential candidates. you could look at hilary clinton.. and how she was able to run and obstacles that got in the way of her progressing forward. you can look at the society and educational messages women receive about becoming the president. once this is done, you can look at each section and judge if there is way for women to run and win or not.

i think you have a lot of work to do in order to work on this eassy. just spend an hour thinking about it and writing things down.

good luck.