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Mar 10, 2010
Poetry / Pain... nightmare I can only hope to awaken from. [3]

Okay so, this is a poem I wrote not to long ago and I've been wondering how i could make it better.

Pain
There is mist in my mind trying to cover the terror that has embedded itself there.
The pain I felt haunts me everyday.
It is a nightmare I can only hope to awaken from.
The bruises and scars cover my body, my mind, and my heart.
My screams still echo in my ears in the darkness.
Pain eats at my soul, making me nothing.
I only wish to be free of the empty darkness that fills my heart and terrorizes my mind.
For the truth is I am nothing more than broken and sorrowfilled.
I am nothing more than pain itself.

Let me know what you think.
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