Poetry / Is my colour poem any good? If not, how would you fix it? (Colour: Red) [3]

Red the colour of emotions that stir the blood
Red the colour of anger which was felt by someone towards another
Red the colour of loath
Red the colour of fire between two lovers
Red the colour of her cheeks soon after
Red the colour of love
Crimson red the colour like no other

... It's not -too- suggestive for 10th graders is it?