Writing Feedback / Cause & Effects of Computer Addiction [5]

Hey guys, I was just wondering if anyone out there that is pretty good in the grammar and punctuation department could read over this paper and tell me what to change? I happen to always miss something when proof-reading it myself and being that we're on spring break and campus is closed, it would be awesome if I got someone elses opinion before class on Monday. Thanks in advance, be as critical as you need to be!

Cause and Effects of Computer Addiction

In the 21st Century, computer addiction isn't all that uncommon anymore. Now that anyone can get a relatively good PC without breaking the bank, more people are getting hooked without even knowing it. I can personally attest to computer addiction being a real problem in society today. With online banking, shopping, TV/movies, games, and other various means of entertainment, there's really no need to leave the house other than for physical interaction.

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