Undergraduate / the game art and design degree - Need a little help with an Entry essay [5]

Hello, i would like your opinion about my entry essay for the game art and design degree.
I am from another country so English is not my native language and i would also like to know if i have any grammar or spelling mistakes

the question is: "How will The Art Institutes of California-San Diego help you to attain your career goals" and it only needs to be 150-170 words

Heres the essay

When I started playing games i found the new world appearing in front of my eyes. I loved playing games and always found a few features that would make a game even better, easier for player to understand and more fun.

Studying to The Art Institute of San Diego will help me to learn about art, how to draw magnificent drawings or create 3d characters for computer games. The school will teach me the basics and the secrets of good art and drawing.

I currently look games from a gamer's view and i want to see how things look like from game designers view. Moreover, I want to learn what are the limitations when creating a game, as well as game engine, company and gameplay limitations.

These are a few of the reasons why i want to attend that school. Currently feeling very excited for this choice because i was always very passionate when there was something so interesting such as game art and design