Essays / "Support, refute or qualify with the author" [6]

THANKS so MUCH TO BOTH OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks to Vakax for generating some ideas and thanks to Ef_Kevin for proof reading my paragraph!!!

I wish I could write like you guys - well maybe someday...

By the way, this site doesn't have any ads, I would have clicked on them as a way of donations...
And why doesn't this site use phpbb? Wouldn't it be simpler to use phpbb as opposed to a self written forum?

And no I have not been to a pastry shop, my blood stream doesn't like extremely sweet stuff. - but I do get the point you're trying to make.

and yes Kevin, I will be glad to post my full essay after I finish later on today... THANKS AgAIN TO BOTH OF YOU!!!!!!

Writing Feedback / What Is Common Sense? [5]

Pure truth right here "If someone will ever ask me what is common sense ,I will not be surprised, because I doubt that if it exists anymore, or even had ever existed!"

Essays / "Support, refute or qualify with the author" [6]

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!! MEANS ALOT!!

So far though I have created this, you can read it once you come back ;)

Televisions are now in an era where TVs do not exist within TVs for more than a few seconds. What's being televised instead are shows that immobilize the person watching TV and turning them into root vegetables. Barbara Ehrenreich, according to her passage "The Worst Years of Our Lives," agrees that TV "has transformed the American people into root vegetables." Televisions over the years have failed to persuade people into imitating what is being done on TV. Televisions have failed to persuade movements in people throughout the years due to the televised content being too dangerous, technological improvements, wider range of channels and the fact that it requires people to get up from the couch.