Posts by nevaeh

nevaeh

Apr 14, 2010

Undergraduate / National Honors Society Long Essay, commited to qualities, for review [3]

Wow that is really good!! YOu did such a great job though i was wondering does it truly have to be that long i am in nhs .. and mine was short but smart i would reccomend that you just get to point...Hope that helps!!!! Good luck :)

nevaeh

Apr 14, 2010

Poetry / Five sense poem about an emotion [7]

hey, i wrote a peom about ture love but it didnt go like i planeed , so i thought how about jealosy. I wrote a five sense peom... what do you think? Is it any good? I was wondering if you could also help me make it better pleaseee!!!

Jealosy
Jealosy is the colorof a wreking ball hitting you in the face,blinding you.
Jealosy is the smell of a bitter aweet summer romance.
Jealosy is the taste of a rotten apple.
Jealosy is the earsplitting sound of smashing glass hitting the floor.
Jealosy is the look of a stingy person who only wants more and more
Jealsoy makes you feel like you are being teared apart slowly.

What do you think? Pleaseee helppp :)

nevaeh

Apr 13, 2010

Poetry / Five sense poem about an emotion [7]

Hi... can someone pleaseee help me create a Five sense poem ( a poem including you five sense color,smell,tase,sound,and feel) about an emotion.

I was thinking maybe First love i have a couple of ideas but i need a lot of help .Please please if someone can help me!!!!!!!!

Five sense poem
what color is the emotion
What does it smell like?
What does it taste like?
How does the emotion sound?
How does the emotion make you feel?

First Love
It appears out of nowhere, it hits you, seeing only white ,blinding you.
It is fresh like the cool air of a monday morning.
...?
...?
It comes crashing towards you booming like a thundourous storm.
...?
I feel a joyful new delight,something i will feel always.

That all i have pleases can someone please assist me with this pleaseee!!!!