Writing Feedback / you agree/disagree with ;'' it is better for children to grow up in the big city [5]

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1.I am for the I dea...
I agree with the idea that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than a big city. There are several reasons why I think so.

Firstly, in the countryside, children are being lived in nature environment, with many kinds of trees or animals as well as fresh air with clean water.

Secondly, having been more safety, they are living in the places where fewer of cars and construction sites than in a big city are. In addition they would not be able to influence by complicated social evil such as, drug, drinking in bars or discos.

In sum, I think children should grow up in the countryside than in a big city. It is not only better for children's safety environment but it also provides the natural surrounding indeed. There for they always feel the live in peaceful.

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2.I am against the statement that
It is better for children grow up in the countryside than a big city, the effect of surrounded environment is very important with children. So that think Children are grown up in a big city they will have more conditions to develop themselves

Grown up in a big city since the day they are still a child, they can learn at the school with good teacher as well as their parents finance, to join the activities at school or community with their friends it make them develop the communication skill, Moreover to relax with convenience facilities as swimming-poor, libraries, or computers,,, whenever they get sick the good hospitals with professional doctors nearly. Not only that of these they can attend many kinds of big event as festival or concerts, fairs as well as with multiple options of fashion, commodities, To enjoy convenience transportation system.

In sum, Grown up in a big city is lived in a dynamic environment to approach advanced technology, convenience facilities and freedom of choose all kind of commodities as well as services,