Writing Feedback / Eating at restaurants or at home? TOEFL essay. [5]

Hi Vijaya,my name is Tadesse
I like the way you mentioned about eating fresh food rather than freezed food.In my opinion, the grammars are fine except Some commas after dependent clauses and transitional words.One thing I saw and think to be corrected is,paragrasph three"Got Shpuld Be Get" because you used the word "some times."

Bye! good job!