bumbledebee
May 26, 2010
Undergraduate / Appeal Essay for Science Course [5]
Hi, I am currently appealing to NUS Science Course and will be more than happy for a feedback on my essay.
Every man has definitely done a dangerous move at least once in their life. When I choose to apply to NUS Science Course, I know that I am doing it. With grades that are pretty far from the cut-off point, getting rejected is not a surprise for me. However, I would like to give my words if I am going to be accepted through the appeal. I will maintain at least 3.5 on my GPA and hence able to graduate in time. I am a man of my words. I promised my Chemistry teacher to be the 'most improved student' for the subject. I am not sure if I do win the title but the improvement from S to B within the span of 2 months does prove something. This happens with my Mathematics too, my grades improve from U to C. Furthermore, even if I do not fulfill it, NUS has nothing much to lose. I will simply join the small list of undergraduates who neglect their studies. However, for me, I will lose my credibility and it means that I had wasted my life by not able to earn something when most people can.
If possible, do give me suggestions on how to end it. I am still working on the ending. Thank You.
p.s: S to B is something like F to B.
Hi, I am currently appealing to NUS Science Course and will be more than happy for a feedback on my essay.
Every man has definitely done a dangerous move at least once in their life. When I choose to apply to NUS Science Course, I know that I am doing it. With grades that are pretty far from the cut-off point, getting rejected is not a surprise for me. However, I would like to give my words if I am going to be accepted through the appeal. I will maintain at least 3.5 on my GPA and hence able to graduate in time. I am a man of my words. I promised my Chemistry teacher to be the 'most improved student' for the subject. I am not sure if I do win the title but the improvement from S to B within the span of 2 months does prove something. This happens with my Mathematics too, my grades improve from U to C. Furthermore, even if I do not fulfill it, NUS has nothing much to lose. I will simply join the small list of undergraduates who neglect their studies. However, for me, I will lose my credibility and it means that I had wasted my life by not able to earn something when most people can.
If possible, do give me suggestions on how to end it. I am still working on the ending. Thank You.
p.s: S to B is something like F to B.
