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Jun 1, 2010
Writing Feedback / comparison between 5 countries, asking about Ielts writing task one [3]

hi

i have the following question please,
in ielts task one i have the following question:

the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features:

and then the table:

my question is about the introduction i wrote the following introduction:
The table shows a comparison between 5 countries, namely , Italy, Sweden, Spain, Turkey, and Irland, regarding to their consumption on different items.

is it ok? i mean can i write that "the table shows a comparison" while they say in question that the table gives information.

Thank You in advance
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