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three battles significant in evoving canada as an independant country [6]
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In Canadian history battles have been significant events that further the development of Canada into an independent country. Such battles are Vimy ridge, D-day , and the Suez crisis.
The capture of Vimy ridge a key location that ensured a visible position overlooking the Douai plan (Cook,141) is a significant battle that boosted the development of Canada as an independent country. This is evident when it is stated ''Though it was the collective sacrifice and deeds of all Canadians during the war years - both those at the front and those on the home front - that eventually won Canada's full independence from Britain''(Cook,142).This quote explains how the successful capture of Vimy Ridge by all regions of Canada altered this ridge as an aspect that characterized the sacrifices of Canadians, making it visible to the French government that Canada is a strong country and deserves to be independent. The victorious capture of Vimy ridge by Canadians with the help of General Author Currie's well thought out plan furthers the development of Canada into an independent country.
Another significant battle that furthers the development of Canada as an independent country is the Suez Canal Crisis, this crisis emerged because of Nasser's interest in the canal representing an essential trade route significant to Britain causing Britain to invade Israel to achieve control over the canal once again (The Suez crisis and the Birth Of Canadian Peacekeeping) . This battle is significant to Canada when Canada refuses to help Britain in the invasion after realizing about the refusal of helping Britain from the United States. The reason behind Canada's support towards the US is because Canada needs assistance in the near future for battles such as the cold war and the second world war this is evident when it is stated, '' He understood that his support for the US was key in the years following the Second World War and the beginning of the Cold War. Hence, Pearson never considered Canada's role during Suez as neutral, nor were his interests with the people of Egypt.''(Holland,53).This showcases that Canada is able to make its own decisions as an independent country highlighting the advantages and disadvantages for Canada. The Suez Canal Crisis is a battle in which Canada was not only recognized as a peace keeping country but also an event that furthered the development of Canada as an independent country.
The last significant event that furthered the development of Canada into an independent country is D-day, a battle that eventually went according to plan, but sadly with much frustration didn't go according to the timetable(Hastings,319).This battle is significant when it is stated ''The status as an independent country, only shakily established in 1919, was beyond doubt after 1945''(World War 2 -The Canadian Encyclopedia).This quote explains how after Vimy ridge the start of Canada as an independent country was established alongside it many doubts that its status may drop in the near future, but, after d-day it was confirmed that Canada was an independent country and nation without any doubt in mind. The reason for Canada being confirmed as an independent country and nation after D-day is their landing at Juno beach and being able to accomplish their purpose while facing underwater obstacles, land mines, barbed wire, and heavy machine gunfire from the Germans(Cruxton and Wilson,241). This is evident when it is stated, ''At the end they had met their objectives, the only Allied force to do so that day'' (Hastings, 243).with the supporting evidence outlined it is concluded that D-day is a significant event in Canadian history that has helped in the evolution of Canada as an independent country.
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