Writing Feedback / Term paper about Christ Figure in literature [3]

Here is something that seems a little bit inefficient:


... it will be better to leave out the extra phrase, In people's lives, G God affects numerous parts of people's lives, such as moral values, ideas, and feelings. Especially people who believe in God are inspired by God's ordinary life and his unbelievable abilities. In literature, a Christ figure is defined as ...

But this sentence is too simple : Especially people who believe in God are inspired by God's ordinary life and his unbelievable abilities. In literature, a Christ figure is defined as ...

I suggest this:
God affects numerous parts of people's lives, such as their moral values, ideas, and feelings. In literature, a Christ figure is defined as ...

Because this seems like your main idea
[The] Christ figure literature technique shows how strongly Christ has affe cted our lives.