Writing Feedback / Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of travel or work after high school. [3]

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There are two disadvantages on the other hand. [b]Could be better: On the other hand, there are two disadvantages.

First, graduation : Firstly Second, attitudes toward : Secondly

In conclusion, I believe students should consider both = In conclusion, students should consider both ...

Great job, however this is not clear which one is better if work or traveling.