Undergraduate / "Swamp kitty," a.k.a. Cottontail - a college entrance application [7]

I'm also about to start applying to college. Since it's just your rough draft, here's some of my more conceptual ideas: 1. You don't need to make a laundry list of accomplishments; the colleges will see those on the other parts of the application. Also, avoid the slashes in the last line. It's just too casual.