MAKITHPN2011
Aug 10, 2010
Undergraduate / "It's just the mirror," Howard Accounting Transfer Essay [2]
Hello,
I'm posting because I'm stuck and in need of some feedback. I have started writing what I would like to become my essay for Howard's Transfer application, but I can often be critical of myself and would like to hear some feedback about what I have written thus far.
In 500 words, tell us what makes you, you. What are your strengths, weaknesses, and your motivation? What separates you from any other applicant? How do you think Howard University will increase your strengths and diminish your weaknesses?
"It's just the mirror," I thought as I stood there staring at my image. I saw a tall, well built, handsome individual with dark features, and a smooth tan complexion. I was slightly surprised because for the first time I began to completely embrace my physical image. For so long I wanted to be that other individual, the one who seemed to have it all together, never missing a beat. I learned that day that life is a journey, and we are all put on this earth for different reasons. That reflection in the mirror showed me that I too am somebody, and while I may not be where I want to be I can certainly work toward getting there. Moving forward, my inner man was strengthened and I begin to embrace any form of rejection as a step towards success. As a result I used my motivation to begin working full-time and engage in furthering my education. In being motivated to further my education I have been granted the opportunity to enhance my knowledge and embrace some wonderful accomplishments. In turn, it has provided me with the understanding of determination and self-satisfaction; determined to reach my goal of becoming a Certified Public Accountant and being satisfied with what I'm striving to achieve. As an applicant of Howard University, being a non-traditional student has provided me with the advantage of experiencing life outside of the classroom, and gaining a precise understanding of my future plans. This in turn has resulted in my desire of applying to Howard as an Accounting major in which I'm positive I will acquire the knowledge needed to help me succeed throughout the life of my career...
Again this is not complete, but I'm not sure if it's strong enough; so I'm looking for feedback!
Thanks in advance!
Hello,
I'm posting because I'm stuck and in need of some feedback. I have started writing what I would like to become my essay for Howard's Transfer application, but I can often be critical of myself and would like to hear some feedback about what I have written thus far.
In 500 words, tell us what makes you, you. What are your strengths, weaknesses, and your motivation? What separates you from any other applicant? How do you think Howard University will increase your strengths and diminish your weaknesses?
"It's just the mirror," I thought as I stood there staring at my image. I saw a tall, well built, handsome individual with dark features, and a smooth tan complexion. I was slightly surprised because for the first time I began to completely embrace my physical image. For so long I wanted to be that other individual, the one who seemed to have it all together, never missing a beat. I learned that day that life is a journey, and we are all put on this earth for different reasons. That reflection in the mirror showed me that I too am somebody, and while I may not be where I want to be I can certainly work toward getting there. Moving forward, my inner man was strengthened and I begin to embrace any form of rejection as a step towards success. As a result I used my motivation to begin working full-time and engage in furthering my education. In being motivated to further my education I have been granted the opportunity to enhance my knowledge and embrace some wonderful accomplishments. In turn, it has provided me with the understanding of determination and self-satisfaction; determined to reach my goal of becoming a Certified Public Accountant and being satisfied with what I'm striving to achieve. As an applicant of Howard University, being a non-traditional student has provided me with the advantage of experiencing life outside of the classroom, and gaining a precise understanding of my future plans. This in turn has resulted in my desire of applying to Howard as an Accounting major in which I'm positive I will acquire the knowledge needed to help me succeed throughout the life of my career...
Again this is not complete, but I'm not sure if it's strong enough; so I'm looking for feedback!
Thanks in advance!