aurora33
Aug 26, 2010
Undergraduate / distinguished academics coupled with exuberant traditional school spirit, Ohio [4]
I need advice on my college essay. Thanx in advance :) ..(Its my first essay so i was kind of anxious and started over multiple times.)
Prompt: Why are you interested in The Ohio State University? (300 words)
Figuring out what school to attend post-secondary education is possibly the biggest gamble a student will ever make. Throughout my high school career I have maintained high grades, so my parents and guidance counselor encouraged me to consider attending an Ivy League school. Even though those schools promise world-class education, they do not present the full College Experience of a vibrant and lively community like that of The Ohio State University. As a triple threat excelling in both academics, athletics, and diversity, I believe that I could continue to blossom as an intellectual at OSU because its configuration parallels to that of my persona.
As co-captain of my school's cheerleading squad, I find immense joy in expressing school spirit and engaging in various school activities, but I still uphold my studies as my main priority. My admiration of the versatility of OSU has brought me to genuinely believe that it is my dream school. Academically, I am drawn to the university's outstanding architecture program and impressed by its ranking among the top twenty public school's in the entire nation. Also, the required prerequisite courses for the architecture program provide me with reassurance that The Ohio State University is dedicated to administering a thorough education to its students.
Aside from the academic allure of OSU, its effervescent school spirit is what seals the deal. There's something so divine about the positive atmosphere of happiness and unity at a school function or game that stimulates my soul. I declare The Ohio State University as the best of both worlds. It is an ideal environment of distinguished academics coupled with exuberant traditional school spirit that I would be honored to be a part of.
I need advice on my college essay. Thanx in advance :) ..(Its my first essay so i was kind of anxious and started over multiple times.)
Prompt: Why are you interested in The Ohio State University? (300 words)
Figuring out what school to attend post-secondary education is possibly the biggest gamble a student will ever make. Throughout my high school career I have maintained high grades, so my parents and guidance counselor encouraged me to consider attending an Ivy League school. Even though those schools promise world-class education, they do not present the full College Experience of a vibrant and lively community like that of The Ohio State University. As a triple threat excelling in both academics, athletics, and diversity, I believe that I could continue to blossom as an intellectual at OSU because its configuration parallels to that of my persona.
As co-captain of my school's cheerleading squad, I find immense joy in expressing school spirit and engaging in various school activities, but I still uphold my studies as my main priority. My admiration of the versatility of OSU has brought me to genuinely believe that it is my dream school. Academically, I am drawn to the university's outstanding architecture program and impressed by its ranking among the top twenty public school's in the entire nation. Also, the required prerequisite courses for the architecture program provide me with reassurance that The Ohio State University is dedicated to administering a thorough education to its students.
Aside from the academic allure of OSU, its effervescent school spirit is what seals the deal. There's something so divine about the positive atmosphere of happiness and unity at a school function or game that stimulates my soul. I declare The Ohio State University as the best of both worlds. It is an ideal environment of distinguished academics coupled with exuberant traditional school spirit that I would be honored to be a part of.
