Piney4
Aug 30, 2010
Undergraduate / Ideal Beauty-Undergrad admission [4]
This essay is very, very long. Two pages is probably a bit too much.
I also think that it's written too much like a research paper. It tries to prove a point, but what does it say about you?
This essay is very, very long. Two pages is probably a bit too much.
I also think that it's written too much like a research paper. It tries to prove a point, but what does it say about you?