hkk
Sep 14, 2010
Undergraduate / "prepare me for larger-scale engineering" - Purdue Personal Statement [4]
I changed a few lines and added a little more info in the first paragraph, thanks for the help. Any other suggestions would be appreciated.
I added a few notes about changes I'd like to make in parenthesis, but am having trouble with wording.
During this time engineering became my unacknowledged hobby. (<-- could use different word?) It wasn't until much later in my academic career that a greater appreciation for engineering developed. After the first lesson in an actual engineering course, it became the subject of all my research. (<-- I want to say that it was all I studied outside of schoolwork.)
I changed a few lines and added a little more info in the first paragraph, thanks for the help. Any other suggestions would be appreciated.
I added a few notes about changes I'd like to make in parenthesis, but am having trouble with wording.
During this time engineering became my unacknowledged hobby. (<-- could use different word?) It wasn't until much later in my academic career that a greater appreciation for engineering developed. After the first lesson in an actual engineering course, it became the subject of all my research. (<-- I want to say that it was all I studied outside of schoolwork.)