Essays / "Watermelon-eating months in New Orleans" - Need help is this a good thesis [3]

As a child, I was always saddened at the thought of leaving my friends on the last day of school. Although it was only for two months every year, it felt like it would be forever. However, those feelings would quickly disappear, as every summer I knew that I would be spending those watermelon-eating months in New Orleans with my favorite cousin, Mike. That was only where the excitement begins. The way they ended gave me unforgettable memories, with priceless moments, and how life changes without any notice.