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Sep 25, 2010
Essays / Exemplification Essay (Intro Paragraph) - Qualities that Make an Athlete Great [3]
My task was to write an exemplification essay on "Qualities that Make an Athlete Great." This is what I have written down so far. Any suggestions?
There are various characteristics one must acquire in order to be considered a great athlete. One key element is one must be a well-rounded team player, and not focused on oneself. Another key trait is the concept of one being well disciplined, during and not during game time. Lastly, it is inevitable that one must be able to perform one's great skills under a lot of pressure, mentally and physically. In conclusion, a great athlete is not made overnight, such skills are acquired through years of training and dedication.
My main issue is coming up with a conclusion sentence, they just come out so boring and vague.
My task was to write an exemplification essay on "Qualities that Make an Athlete Great." This is what I have written down so far. Any suggestions?
There are various characteristics one must acquire in order to be considered a great athlete. One key element is one must be a well-rounded team player, and not focused on oneself. Another key trait is the concept of one being well disciplined, during and not during game time. Lastly, it is inevitable that one must be able to perform one's great skills under a lot of pressure, mentally and physically. In conclusion, a great athlete is not made overnight, such skills are acquired through years of training and dedication.
My main issue is coming up with a conclusion sentence, they just come out so boring and vague.