kayrock
Oct 3, 2010
Undergraduate / "Find X, the missing element" - University of Chicago Essay [4]
Hey, I'm actually writing off the same prompt! (Note: Ideas and such will not be stolen, at all...I'm just feeding you some opinion.)
You write well. However, I feel like this is lacking in personality and originality. This could be what anybody could write about... Have you written variations or twisted things at all yet?
Hey, I'm actually writing off the same prompt! (Note: Ideas and such will not be stolen, at all...I'm just feeding you some opinion.)
You write well. However, I feel like this is lacking in personality and originality. This could be what anybody could write about... Have you written variations or twisted things at all yet?
