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Oct 3, 2010
Undergraduate / "Sometimes the smallest thing..." - Commonapp Essay - Topic of your choice. [5]

". . . ratio between my score and his started to slowly decreasing"
change to "increase".
Your described ratio is your score divided by his score. decrease means his score increases faster than your score.

there are also grammar mistakes but i have to run right now. i'll post back later.

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