Jake99
Oct 8, 2010
Writing Feedback / Pers.Essay: A Time When I Encountered Something Greater Than Myself--Poverty in India [5]
Looking good, but I think it needs more references to the actual family, and to actual circumstances. The style of writing is good but, as your teacher said, I think it needs to relate to the actual experiences you had. Also, just to let you know, if you need a Proof-reading or Typing services to help you with these essays. You should check out uk proofreading. Good luck with your re-write.
Looking good, but I think it needs more references to the actual family, and to actual circumstances. The style of writing is good but, as your teacher said, I think it needs to relate to the actual experiences you had. Also, just to let you know, if you need a Proof-reading or Typing services to help you with these essays. You should check out uk proofreading. Good luck with your re-write.