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Oct 12, 2010
Poetry / "I recall your gentle touch" - Poem Corrections [5]

I have never written any poetry before. Would anyone be able to correct my first poem, give me some pointers etc...??? Thanx

In the morning, as a gaze at the luminous colours of spring,
I am reminded of your infectious smile.
In the afternoon, as the bitterly cold New England wind races across the highlands,
I think of you and I am warm.
In the evening, as I fix my eyes on the marvels of the constellations,
I reminisce about your dazzling eyes.
And late at night, as I feel my anxieties taking hold,
I recall your gentle touch and I am free.
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