Writing Feedback / Does air travel creates a great deal of pollution and consumes resources? [4]

Try this one-you can download a lot of free e-books such as Cambridge IELTS Practice tests etc: englishtips.org/exam_materials/ielts/

Maybe something usefull here: ielts-blog.com/ielts-writing-samples/ielts-essay-samples-of-band-8/

I also got a e-book "Target band 7"- there are some useful suggestions.

All of those are good until you get a topic like that you tried to write today. I am confused too and cannot get my thoughts organized! :((

Writing Feedback / Does air travel creates a great deal of pollution and consumes resources? [4]

Hi-I am going to take my IELTS in 2 weeks too. It is a tricky topic,this one,isn't it? All I can tell about your essay that it seems you did not state clearly your position there.