Undergraduate / FSU prompt, focused on Artes aspect (Beauty of Intellectual Pursuits) [6]

scratch what I said. I didn't catch the part about the guitar, my bad. In that case I think this essay is well put together and flows very well.

Undergraduate / FSU prompt, focused on Artes aspect (Beauty of Intellectual Pursuits) [6]

I have just finished the first rough draft on this topic for fsu too! I also focused primarily on artes. You gave a better idea of what it should look like and how I should probably add some stuff about intellectual pursuits in my life. As suggestion from me I would say you might want to add maybe something about how art has actually affected your life. I say this because it says "the intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, art, or craft" You might want to add something about a particuar skill. Antoher common factor about my essay and yours is that we both are interested in psychology. However, I am especially interested in art therapy.