Scholarship / Services to country, working, interest in science - why I deserve a scholarship? [4]

I am to write about why I deserve a scholarship to pursue my post-secondary education at Lake-Sumter Community College. I feel like I have good ideas, it's just that my problem is putting those ideas in a logical order. I have written my first paragraph and the start of my second along with all of my ideas so far.

- Provide services to my country; AFROTC USF; Computer Engineer.
- Lscc great education close to home-Final sentence
- Working 40 hrs a week; full time student; maintain 3.5 GPA.
- Strong interest and grasp of mathematics and computer technology.
- Loathe failing a test.
- My desire since middle school.
- Not worry about family's financial situation.

Deciding which boy would make the ideal Homecoming King was certainly one of the most important decisions to half of my high school class. For others it was merely whether or not to wear the name brand Pac Sun, in fear of being ridiculed by fellow peers. While the majority of the school was focusing on miniscule incongruous obsessions, I was deep in thought concerning my life's profession. While analyzing my options for after graduation I had to consider numerous obstructions which would deem college life a nuisance; then, determine ways to eliminate them. Obstructions such as leaving home and quitting my job were out of the question due to the lack of family finances, so my first decision was to attend LSCC: A great education close to home.

Working nearly forty hours a week while still in high school made it rather difficult to keep up with my studies. The task involved late nights, early morning, and even weekends nose deep in my textbooks. Studying is by far one of the most important skills required to be successful during school, and thankfully I've learned to develop superb study skills.