island_g
Oct 19, 2010
Undergraduate / "island to big city" & "single father" [3]
I was born and raised on an island in the keys, 364 miles south of Orlando. Living on an island is heaven; the swaying palm trees, breathtaking sunsets and warm sunny weather. Living on a 2 mile by 5 mile island limits my academic, cultural, and work experiences. The closest fast food restraint is 30-45 minutes away. Some of the reasons I would like to attend UCF are its prime location surrounded by numerous theme parks, restaurants, and thriving cultural diversity. In addition the school itself has an array of clubs, giving me the opportunity to get involved. Also, I am huge fan of the campus layout and how walking/ bike friendly it is. One of my goals is to earn all A's and I feel the academic resources UCF offers will lead me to success. Another goal of mine includes becoming a Certified Public Accountant. UCF offers many internships and job opportunities, Orlando is an amazing city and I would be honored to intern with local accountants to gain experience. The college of business administration at UCF is one of the nation's largest accredited schools of business. The quality education, the location, and the campus itself all make UCF my #1 choice for school.
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I was born and raised on an island in the keys, 364 miles south of Orlando. Living on an island is heaven; the swaying palm trees, breathtaking sunsets and warm sunny weather. Living on a 2 mile by 5 mile island limits my academic, cultural, and work experiences. The closest fast food restraint is 30-45 minutes away. Some of the reasons I would like to attend UCF are its prime location surrounded by numerous theme parks, restaurants, and thriving cultural diversity. In addition the school itself has an array of clubs, giving me the opportunity to get involved. Also, I am huge fan of the campus layout and how walking/ bike friendly it is. One of my goals is to earn all A's and I feel the academic resources UCF offers will lead me to success. Another goal of mine includes becoming a Certified Public Accountant. UCF offers many internships and job opportunities, Orlando is an amazing city and I would be honored to intern with local accountants to gain experience. The college of business administration at UCF is one of the nation's largest accredited schools of business. The quality education, the location, and the campus itself all make UCF my #1 choice for school.
made a few changes to the first passage