lumpool2
Oct 28, 2010
Writing Feedback / What in our life does have more relevance: the experience or some characteristics we are born with? [4]
The second line should begin with,"Research indicates.... ." ommit "the"
You should revise the third line," Most people believe that that our genes not only defines our physical appearance but also our character."
The second line should begin with,"Research indicates.... ." ommit "the"
You should revise the third line," Most people believe that that our genes not only defines our physical appearance but also our character."