Undergraduate / "playing cricket" - Prompt about my amazing extracurricular activity (common app) [2]

This is a common app essay about the extracurricular activities. I am sure there are some mistakes in there. Can u please review it and tell me what i suppose to change

"Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below or on an attached sheet (150 words or fewer)."

The busy, tired and stressful week turns into a fun and relaxed week, after I play cricket with my friends every Tuesday and Saturday. Even though I like to play every sport, but cricket is something that is part of my life. My friends and I gather fifteen people who are interested in learning and/or playing cricket. We have practice sessions on Tuesday, where we improve our cricket skills. I am a fast bowler, and can pitch bowl at least 80+ mph. I am also improving my batting and fielding skills. Some of my friends have a hard time playing because of the level of difficulty in the game. I try to teach them the important details to the best of my ability and to help them increase their confidence. When I will turn eighteen, I will start playing for Dayton Cricket Club. Cricket is my passion, and it had made me strong, confidence, and hard working person.