Undergraduate / "be a more well rounded individual" - reasons for transferring, objectives to achieve [4]

One reason why I would like to transfer to NYU is I am moving to New York and I would like to find a school that is prestigious and will enhance me and help me excel in life. NYU is one of the best schools in the country and if I went there I know that I would be a more well rounded individual which will allow me to help my community in Miami and amend me into a well rounded strong individual. If what everyone says about NYU is true, transferring to NYU would challenge me in a positive way. There is a burning desire inside my soul to attend an institution that would oblige more dedication, diligence, and determination from me and I know that NYU satiates it.

One objective that I have is to allow NYU to transform me into a strong, assiduous, dedicated, and brilliant person. Many of the students at NYU are going to become influential people and I want to build a relationship with them and have a network comprised of future dignitaries so that I can help me and my community in Miami ameliorate. NYU has a tremendous business program that is sets it apart from other universities and I would like to be apart of it so that I can enhance my business sense and have a better understanding of the business and economic world. The thing that I want most from NYU is for it to help me make me and my community incredible.